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Posted: Sun Feb 22, 2009 4:30 pm
by mikemeister_admin
Here is my try. A bit too fast but maybe worth a comment from the expert.
Thomas
Posted: Sun Feb 22, 2009 5:04 pm
by ggroess
A bit to fast perhaps...the sky is in dire need of help...The greens are very nice and you have separated them nicely.
Greg
Posted: Sun Feb 22, 2009 7:58 pm
by mikemeister_admin
Fully agree about heaven. But no idea how to improve that part.
Seems to be some white clouds hanging over mountains with very little information, or?? What have I missed?
Thomas
Posted: Sun Feb 22, 2009 9:07 pm
by ggroess
You have not missed too much; the sky itself is pretty blown but the hillside could use a bit of a rescue. You also have a slight blue cast overall you might like to move the neutral a bit and see if it gets better...you certainly have the color in there which is good.
Greg