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Postby sjordan93436 » Wed Oct 13, 2010 4:09 am

Here I tried to color correct and add some red to the flowers.  Perhaps when I look at it again, I will think of something else. 
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Postby sjordan93436 » Wed Oct 13, 2010 4:23 am

A few more corrections,  no CM.

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Postby ggroess » Wed Oct 13, 2010 9:34 pm

Steve,

The stone needs to be more neutral...Green is just not going to be seen in that situation...Much...
We also like to see the window shadows open up a bit.  Watch the greens as you saturate and keep an eye on the skin tones....

Greg

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Postby sjordan93436 » Sat Oct 16, 2010 12:11 am

I re did my image.  I tried to watch the green and skin tones.

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Postby ggroess » Sat Oct 16, 2010 3:52 pm

Steve,
I know that this is probably a Laptop screen issue but....
It's pretty yellow green in there...The lighting is really nice..you opened up the shadows wonderfully.

Most of the adjustment points are to hold the curve in place so the real adjustments are not spread across the entire image.  I'll post the acv file so you can see it as well.
Apply this acv to your posted image.

Greg
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Postby sjordan93436 » Mon Oct 18, 2010 9:25 pm

Thanks your curves fixed it.  I probably lost it by pinning the paper around the flower.  I also envisioned the stones as a different color.  I should have balanced it better.


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Postby ggroess » Tue Oct 19, 2010 3:06 pm

That's why we are here...to figure this stuff out...

Greg


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