Two doors, one store

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Postby leeharper_admin » Mon Mar 21, 2011 10:06 am

Steve,
You didn't upload your new version - did you mean to? It would be great to see it :)
Lee.

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Postby sjordan93436 » Mon Mar 21, 2011 5:02 pm

Oops. 
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Postby ggroess » Wed Mar 23, 2011 5:01 pm

Try this one...
It seems like the more you work on this the tougher it gets. 
I think you should re-name it "Chinese Finger Trap".

Greg
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Postby leeharper_admin » Wed Mar 23, 2011 7:47 pm

Greg,

I think that the luminosity and saturation of this version are pretty much dead on - you've captured the feeling of dusk really well. I overlaid the color from my version over the top of yours, expecting that I'd prefer the color in my version - very instructive (my color is way off base)...

I like the color of the sky in yours, and the wood near to the woman sitting down looks fantastic.

Very nice :)
Lee.

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Postby ggroess » Thu Mar 24, 2011 12:24 am

Thanks Lee...

It was the Blue channel that made this happen.  Take a look at the green and the blue channels.  If you set zone system pins on the blue channel it is way better than the Green for the luminosity stuff.

I was quite surprised.

Greg

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Postby mikemeister_admin » Thu Mar 24, 2011 3:46 am

If all you wanted to do was to lighten the picture to reveal more detail, then all I did here was to use the Shadow/Highlight filter in Photoshop (at it's default settings).
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Postby sjordan93436 » Thu Mar 24, 2011 6:46 am

Thanks for the corrections.  This started as an exercise.  I will print this special.

BTW- the exif shows an iso 1600 at 1/50 and f 4.0 (max for the lens).  In other words, at the edge.

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Postby mikemeister_admin » Thu Mar 24, 2011 1:44 pm

"The solution to this problem is alimentari!"said Holmes,puffing on his pipe.GregM


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